One of the stories she recalls is a flood where it ruins their straw mats, and her parents were surfing room to room on then, and then they were sent to bed hungry because all of their food washed away. She goes from saying her heritage is sooo rich and powerful and ran the government and were pirates and they did this and that and a bag of chips, then they gave it ALL UP to become poor doctors in the middle of nowhere. "The affect I had" instead of "The effect I had", things like that.Īside from the poor writing style, the story was extremely. Many sentences are awkward due to the lack of common adjectives. Some sentences seemed like they "right click thesaurus" 'd every other word. The grammar and punctuation was very off and awkward at times. Poor writing, awful character, a nightmare to read.
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